Other:instructions need to be followed very closely. each cause and

 

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GRAMMAR:last sentence of first paragraph should be a thesis statement. A thesis outlines what each paragraph is going to be talking about in order. in this case the the sentence is a run-on and is very lengthy
OTHER:Instructions need to be followed very closely. each cause and effect should be tied back into the topic sentence of each paragraph

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