1.5 page high school writing please. and MLA Style
I have enjoyed the analysis of the Cave. However, you haven’t really done a deep enough analysis. I know I didn’t provide any guidance on what is an analysis until today, but I did provide some instructions on what elements should have been analyzed from the cave. Right now, this is mostly a summary of the cave with very little personal experience. You didn’t show the relationship among the parts of the cave (chains, prisoners, shadows, fire, sun) and some personal experience. You don’t necessarily need to do all of those, but you should at least do three item listed in assignment prompt. I have attached a file below with my comments in BOLD on how to improve the essay. Although I am not requiring a revision, I would suggest revising based on my feedback and submitting a revision before the 29th before midnight if you would like a higher grade. You are on the right track, but you need to spend more time establishing the relationships among parts of the Cave with parts of your personal experience. It needs more of YOUR thoughts. What do you think about Plato’s ideas?